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Chaman Jal gaya - Shak ka teer chal gaya

 
Banaya tha maali ne jo chaman badi chaah se
Kaisi giri ye barq, muskurata chaman jal gaya

Har paudhe ko seencha tha pyar ke ehsas se
Kyun khilta hua phool pairon se masal gaya

Ugta tha jahan muskurate hue suraj har roz
Wo suraj kyun waqt se pehle hai dhal gaya

Jo dil jude the ek doosre se ek anjani dor se
Ye kaunsa ehsaas aaj un dilon ko chhal gaya

Kahan gayi wo mohabbat jo ek doosre se thi
Aapas main kyun shak ka yeh teer chal gaya !!

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Author: “Talat”
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One Response to “Chaman Jal gaya - Shak ka teer chal gaya”

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    The Review
    A poem by Talat.
    The idea behind poem is about a DOUBT in RELATION. The poetess has nicely compiled few beautiful lines first telling that with a lot of devotion they had their world but then it got ruined from “doubts in relations”.

    Beauty of poem is the comparison of various aspect with their devotion to bond for each other.

    Applaus !

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