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Bezubaan se ho gaye hain hum

 
Mujhe itni bhi sazaa naa de,
Mere pyaar ki intehaa naa le…
Rukk jaa E chaand tham jaa zara,
Do ghadi mujhe bhi nihaar le…
Main toot kar bikhar chali,
Meri khaakh ko yun hawaa naa de…

Do bol tujhse sunn sakun kabhi,
Main intezaar mey rahii sada…
Tu chal pada mujhe chodh kar,
Deewaar si main khadii rahii…
Sehem gayii hoon bus is baat sey,
Kahin mujhko tu bhulaa naa de….

Yeh kya kiya tuney E dil bata,
Pyaar phir kyon kiya bhala…
Kaise kahe ab yeh meri zubaan,
Kaise khud apna ghar loon jala…
Khaamoshi ki yeh aadat kahin,
Mujhey bezubaa hi banaa naa de….

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One Response to “Bezubaan se ho gaye hain hum”

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    My Review

    A very appealing title “Bezubaan se ho gaye hain hum” . Overall poem is good but according to me, the poem is loosing flow in it.
    But if you look from other side, it shows poetess’s own style. She is comparing her Love life with the Moon, she is requesting moon to wait for her because she loves him a lot, she is symbolizing moon with his lover.

    In the end she is complaining to herself that why she fell in love and now she is unsure that if people come to know about it then would be negative.

    Nice piece of imagination and nice comparison, though flow is little disturbed but thats what I feel, may be other will not find that problem.

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